SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sea Voyage]

Ergh

I think this song really comes to life at 0:39 but the beginning needs to be different and the sound of the ocean is too much of a contrast of the actual sound of the music you are generating. Don't get me wrong, the sound of the song is great, but the beginning seems like it can be better delivered. 02:29 to 02:49 transition could be better delivered as well, just felt a bit forced.

Stavier responds:

Sometimes when I listen to this song, I get annoyed that the pad sounds weird with the build, but then sometimes I listen to it more then it doesn't so I agree with you, it could change. As for the ocean FX, well... I don't know, I actually wanted to add seagulls to that, but I lost that sample too. At 1st, for the transition, I wasn't sure rather too add the pad or not, & sadly, I did. I would change it, but too many reviews and downloads and stuff. But I agree, I would keep just the synth while transitioning, but no pad. Thanx for the review!!!

[Solar Energy]

Ergh

This very much feels like a caged project. I can't tell you how to fix it but it seems like its a song that wants to expand but you may be letting it stay contained in the boundaries you've established. Just seems like it can be more but isn't. Thats pretty much all I can say about it though.

Stavier responds:

Yes, I agree. I could add more, I just wanted to make a calm track though. Not too much, but just to make a good mood & vibe, but still agreeing with addition to the song. Thanx for the review!!!

[Hypnotizing feat. Chris]

Ergh

This needs a little bit of work and it will be great. First, your vocals kinda of drown out your music, it sounds a bit prominent, maybe try and meld the vocals with the music so it sounds more seamless. You should also have a beat that supports the vocals repetition. He is operating on a faster beat then the song is allowing, so just add a bit more so it supports it, to give it a more solid feel. 02:40/02:51 was too much of a break, shorten it so it feels more natural. The longer it is the more disconnected I feel from it, so I think a shorter break will keep the feel and mood in it. Not really a rap reviewer but that was the feel I got from it, keep it up though!

Stavier responds:

For the vocal volume, I usually try to make them louder only because then people don't complain "I can't hear the vocals" or "I can't understand what he's saying." As for the beat, I agree. Maybe I could've added percussion, but I don't think I had any percussion samples at the time. For the break, the only reason it sounds like that is because there was a different break after that, but I cut it out cuz my cousin said it would've been hard to make any more lyrics since the original instrumental is 4:30. Thanx for the review!!!

[An Urgent Message from Optimus]

Ergh

Always great, that guy at the bottom is a turd :D

[Jazz Therapy]

Ergh

I liked the piano solo at 1:16 but the song kind of got static-y at 1:40, it also seemed to really shift at about 2:00. The sax at the end seemed a little hokey and I kinda felt the two different pauses you used seemed slightly too long, made it feel as if the song was over in those spots. But all in all it was alright. I think what would be a better description of this is walking through to different parts of the place because of the numerous transitions.

Stavier responds:

Actually at 1:40 I added a Vinyl FX so that's the reason why it sounds staticy, but at least you noticed, it was kinda for an oldskool FX. Yeah, I was tryin' toshift it a little & just add the percussion cuz I couldn't have added the sax, wanted to save the best for last :D I know what you mean by the sax, but I tried just adding a regular sax it sounded horrible for some reason cuz this is like an oldskool mix kinda song if you think about it. But next time I make a jaz song, the sax won't sound like that. Well, I know what you mean by the breaks. The 1st one is kinda long, I see. The 2nd one was the same, but it had the vinyl FX rising down for a trick appareance, ooooooo, didn't see that comin' :D When the song actually starts, that's kinda the dancing part. Thanx for the review!!!

[demo voice reel]

Ergh

Scenes buddy!!! Throw these voices in some scenes and focus on specific ones so each one sounds better. Not so many in each one, split em up and you'd probably get a lot more reviews and votes, good luck!

[Rednecks and the Devil]

Yeah

I liked the demon struggle, it was a surprise because although it was goofy all around, it became kind of serious, heh.

[Worst Birthday Ever]

Yeah

I don't know what the guy below is frickin talking about, this is Voice acting, dipshit....... Anyway, Tom! Another badass one. The kid sounds great. Good delivery, LOL!

TomStheVoice responds:

Always kind, Sirkillington. You are always kind. :)

[CIS-A Serious Condition]

Yeah

Really good, loved the voice, very professional.

Sentinel94 responds:

Thanks for the kind words!

[Tom-S's Narration Voice Type 1]

Yeah

Oh man, I didn't check this one out yet. Its very good and professional announcer quality....... awesome.

TomStheVoice responds:

Thanks dude! :D