SirKillington's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

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Ergh

From the looks of what you have, the game seems kinda clunky. If you are not really relying on graphics for a game, than story, fluidity and likability need to pick up the slack. Really smooth movement and controller recognition can help a game immensely but that will only go so far. It did not look like you had a lot of customization or items to pick for your character. I don't know the back story of the character.

Although Alien Hominid, Castle Crashers were very simple games with limited graphics, they played really smoothly, had funny and likable stories/characters and an overall personality that resonated from it. Time and thought was put into them and not just a means to make a quick buck. I kinda see what your going for, but this needs a lot more polishing before I would ever buy it from the xbox arcade.

G-F-D responds:

It's supposed to be a quick pick up and play style hack and slash. Yes it is still very raw and needs loads of polishing, but just needed some feedback since I have not really showed it around yet. The game is aimed for 3+ so it is quite simple, 2-3 buttons and simple graphics. There is a back story, quite a long one and a lot of features like chase scenes and collecting items that unlock powers. Basically you have to chase the boss to different areas of the world and collect artifacts that will slow him down etc. It's not actually going up on xbox arcade :P it's just a 1st year work in progress uni project!
Thanks for the review :)

[Who's Complete Breakfast?]

Ergh

Your flash isn't playing. just a still shot of a stick guy.

Pizzaface4372 responds:

That's weird, it's playing on my computer, sorry about that

[Apple, run for your life!]

Ergh

I liked the wiggly arms when he got up on the counter :D

HolyKonni responds:

If you like those wiggly arms, I recommend "Adventure Time". Look it up!!

[Found you]

Ergh

Your audio is really low, other than that, good job!

jagondudo responds:

yea sorry about that :(, I'll try a re-upload when i get some sleep hehe

[Eight Bit Strange 2]

Yeah

Awesome, absolutely love these and very professional feel to em. Good job, MORE EPISODES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GregK responds:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. More episodes will be arriving daily.

[POP! an adventure]

Yeah

This is great. Classic animation and I think the only true art in the world is cartoons because they convey emotion perfectly. I think every animator should do this kind of thing at least once. Again, great work.

turtleco responds:

aw thanks

[The Worlds Opening 16]

Ergh

It is exactly how an anime opening would be, just way simplified. Would get a better score if you had accompanied quality animation. But if your trying to post something to be reviewed you have to present your best and you can't expect people not to comment on the animation as this is a flash.

Sarena responds:

Thanks, I'll try my best to improve. ^^
And I just meant that I didn't want people to just criticize my work by pointing out everything horrible about it (like I have received rude comments about on my past submissions). But thank you for leaving me a good comment. :)

[Castlevania Whip Crack]

Ergh

Pretty good. I like the ren and stimpy feel to it. You had a lot of void spots of silence or your animation was stopping a bit. But good idea.

kalabor106 responds:

Yeah kalabor106, mentioned that it was slow and should of been speed up in some spots. Maybe I need to take his advice a little more.