SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Art-Link, V.A. "Relax"]

Ergh

Yet again man, try to read out each sentence before, multiple times to see what you are trying to show the audience. You have a good accent for it, but the acting needs more work.

Art-Link responds:

Yet again, thanks for the advice, those voice actings were from a kinda long time ago and I was vey unexperienced, I shall try again soon.

[Art-link, Voice Acting num1]

Ergh

You need to talk to yourself more and realize the inflections of emotions your trying to convey....... you need to know how to make your emotions sound real and authentic. Felt like you were trying to be surprised instead of being surprised. Act it out before you do it.

Art-Link responds:

I´ll do that, thanks alot

[Just another love theme]

Ergh

Read this while listening:

[insert name], how could you have left me...... me. Everything I did for you, carried you along the way. I loved you when you were in that chair, before your new legs and you do this to me. Your too good for me now, is that it! Just another stepping stone to newer legs. So what if I told you I've had better lays than you, its true. A truth I never hesitated to tell you. Not once did I tell you, you couldn't or said anything about your disfigurement.

Jesus, what have I become because of you... you monster. You ate up everything in my soul, and my house. Nothing was good enough, not the bathtub washes or the awkward haircuts(crying). Do.....(sob) do you remember when I rolled you to the edge of the pier. I told you if you fell and sank I would be there to get you out, be there to carry you, be there to love you. And now my love is gone with you and your perfection. As old news as your previous life.

But its okay, I'm going to be better from this. I will rise above you and make you see you are nothing and I am the strong one. Never looking back at the past times of joy we shared. Wheeling you to the dentist against your will, putting the wheel lock on. You could never reach it...... but that's the past now. The only future I see for you is my mission. I will bring you back to your disfigured self. You will be re-crippled and your fancy legs will no longer serve you as a new life. You will never know it was me. We will eventually get back together and I will wheel you to the pier once more....

Can you feel yourself sinking. Can you feel the panick. No one there to carry you. No one there to save you. No one there to love you.... That was me.... DIE YOU BASTARD.......... die and never come back to the old life you left. You CRIPLE!!!

LOL! Thats what I was thinking when I heard this. Good Job.

Vertlain responds:

You've got some wild imagination... ô_o Now I'll have to think about making a music video for this. Thank you for all the (kind) words!

[The start of an Adventure]

Ergh

You gotta get a different brass sound, its way too synthetic sounding. I don't see it as an epic thing, sorta a what everyone else is doing now the hero is did, lol

Flaraen responds:

I know, I think so too.. I may get garage band

[The Forgotten Passage]

Ergh

0:28 to 0:35 could use a better lead in, kinda felt separate. The ending got a little crowded too, but good tune and beat.

ragingmullet responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Its funny you mention those 2 spots because I had a hard time filling in those spots with stuff I liked. I tried but I've got lots of things to still learn.

[Fly Sky High - Balderdact]

Ergh

I think the only thing you can approve is dragging your melody out just a bit only because certain parts sound a bit choppy but it sounds good other wise, very epic adventure scene feel to it.

balderdact responds:

Yup, at the time I was making this I had a very limited amount of instruments available to use. Thanks for the review and I'll try to make a remix or something of this in the future. :D

[Squid [MA]]

Blargh

I have no idea what you are trying to do with this, sounds like Mr. Wizard on acid. Your song really doesn't have a direction at all and the beat you have is completely different then your synthetic so it is off putting and the wa wa stuff really hurts the ears and you use it so much it kinda kills the song.

madnessassault responds:

>.>

[A Journey to Elsewhere]

Ergh

I really liked the fact you changed pace a lot throughout and all the sounds really complimented each other.... but there is something about this song I don't like, either the sound itself or over all toon. But just because of my own personal feeling about it doesn't mean you didn't do a good job. Keep it up.

DJThunderGod responds:

I hear what you mean but thanks for the review!

[Anime Cliche 2 Awesome!]

Ergh

Good stuff, I think if you recorded somewhere your allowed to yell it would probably add some more character to your impressions. Piccolo was flawless though.

king-blue responds:

you are completely right.....soon.....soon it will happen. :)

[Fruity Evening]

Ergh

You definitely think you got your own style here and its good. I think though as your song was growing throughout and more so when you would pause, but it seemed on your second pause at 3:23 you carried it to the same. It didn't evolve which I think really moves a listener to want more because the song becomes dynamic. It was still a good song but I think you can make it even better. 10/5.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, I'm tryin' to get a new style of Hip Hop & RnB. Techno & all that, imma wait to make more of that stuff now that I got new stuff. I totally know what your talkin' about when you say that pause at 3:23 & I might add somethin' there, but I may not cuz I'll save your advice for my next RnB song. I like to take your words of advice cuz you always have some kinda constructive critism. Like Just Go With It for example, you say I could've had a better brush hat & yet you rate it a 10 for the emotion of the song. Anyways, thanx for rating & reviewin'. Be on the lookout for any of my new RnB stuff.