SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Press A to Ascend]

You...

Hope you like this song, Because it will be the end of you!!!!

McPhearson responds:

Hey, get back here you summabitch!

[Epsilon]

Ergh...

Its simple and good, just not my style. Stay in school.

McPhearson responds:

I'll get you, if it's the last thing I do! This isn't over!

[Chasing Time - BeefourMusic]

Yeah

This song has a lot of personality, I think thats why its so easy to get into. Good job.

SUB4RU responds:

Thanks Sir

- BeefourMusic -

[Even the Score]

Moo...

Just add a little bit of diversity with another verse, something different from what you are using, but put it in the middle and come back to the original. the Beginning is really good and strong like I was gingerly ear raped, but then it sticks with the same ol' same ol'. And your ending was kinda weak.

I like your stuff, just want a little more to the song and a good ending.

Schaafbros responds:

Thanks for the comment. It is pretty repetitive, I agree. I just tried to make it as if there was singing on top of it, hence all of the repeating parts.

[[TAE] Spaces]

Ahh...

Seems like it changes direction a lot, like you have two different songs in one. Don't know what else to tell ya.

TheAdamEXP responds:

It was just something random on Garageband during Piano class. Just a quick loop.

[Mystifying Rain]

Ugh...

Ok, the introduction of the sound at 00:31 is off putting and I was expecting a tier of beat to hit at 00:46 I felt never came. At 1:02 you introduced the light beat and it never went anywhere. Then the first sond from 00:31 seemed like it was really drowning out everything you had. When it finally went away, the song kinda just drops off. I agree something needs to be there to carry the song and the song itself needs to rise to something.

Not trying to be harsh but I just wasn't feeling this one. I think the background music has a definite potential as does you, but right now I don't think this song has any direction. It definitely needs some work.

Stavier responds:

Well, I didn't wanna add the beat yet cuz since this is a kinda short song, the beat didn't completely matter when it came. I'll admit, the strings at 0:31 kinda drained it out, but trust me, I controlled the volume on that part & if I didn't, it would've drained the song more. Trust me, this song was kinda for fun since I was inspired by DP, some of my other songs are way better then this one. If you ain't feelin' this song, check out my song Walkin' Towards Some Memories, that's my most popular one. & p.s. - I didn't vote this review useless or helpful, so that was someone else.

[Let_It_Shine]

Argh

1:08 should have a new wave with a strong beat, kinda dropped off. Other then that good.

supercoolmike responds:

ya, sorry about that, I ran out of ideas and whenever I did thought of something, it didn't sound right. I agree that there should be some umph or some drums but I wanted to take these experiments slow for now.

[I-Saved-The-World: Hurdstul]

Ergh

Really liked 2:12 part, seemed like the part you were trying. Seemed kinda rushed. still alright though. I think if you put somethin' into it you would probably make some really good stuff.

I-Saved-The-World responds:

Thanks for the rewiew! I'll try to spend more time polishing my newer tracks - try checking those out and let me know what you think!
-ISTW

[Star Shooter]

I don't know

There really isn't a beat that carries you through the song, most of it is a composite of background music. I think if you introduced a good strong beat at 00:13 or 00:21 it would give it some kick. Just a suggestion though.

Cruzon63 responds:

I will try to fix that,I did not take much time on this at all