Ergh
Needs more smashing around and maybe a little more vulgarity in it and I think you would have a solid audio.
Ergh
Needs more smashing around and maybe a little more vulgarity in it and I think you would have a solid audio.
I was going to add more sound effects, but the problem was that I was (and still am) using a site that only allows me 5 free sound effects a month, and I don't have very much money right now so I cant really pay a full membership, but thank you for the review!
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Yet again, Love your comedy, very fluid improv.
Once again, your word is flattering. I don't particularly care for the other words, just that one word.
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Good comedy and filler talking. lol.
Thank you for your kind word. Just one word.
Ergh
I like the variation you have and the crackly voice you already have really plays into the other voices well. The only thing I would suggest is have different character development to which each one has its own personality. Although it was a simple phrase, there are numerous ways each one of those characters could have said them, giving the statement a more profound effect. Good stuff.
Great Idea. I will work on recording that and getting it uploaded! Thank you!
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This is awesome lol. Loved the difference in characters with the radio and demons. Sound effects were a nice touch too.
It was fun to do, but I've already got some nice ideas for when I redo this for an animation. Thanks for the review!
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Get a better snare noise for 00:38. That aside, this is what you should do. Your very good with mood and groove. The song has personality which I kinda feeling a lot of your techno is lacking just because I don't think your really putting yourself into em.
Yeah, some of my techno songs are really old songs, but I'm workin' harder on my techno ones. This one was just mellow & I wanna make a combination of mellow & techno, you know, e. piano etc. The ones that i think i have more feelin' for are my upbeat techno songs like Perpetual Island. I put feelin' in my songs of course, it just I'm more of an upbeat techno guy then downbeat or anythin' like that.
Ergh
The sound at 00:16 sounds a bit harsh at first but is alright after the rest of the beat is in. Wasn't really feeling 2:08, the melody was kinda off putting and at 2:40 you have a lot going on. 3:14 felt like it was a totally different song, just took a different direction.
Just stuff I noticed while listening. Not really bad or good observations.
Yea, I know what you're takin' about. I understand that there was mood changes, just swappin', but I'm workin' on other songs that I know I wan't change the mood. Thanx for the review.
Ergh
Guitar had a good mood to it and feeling, but your drums are a little choppy. Other then that its good.
Thanx man, the guitar is my favorite part about this song.
Ergh
The buzzing is kinda off putting, doesn't feel good on the ears. 1:23 is when the song seems to be when it gets personality. Maybe instead of having the buzzing, get rid of that section and let it lead in.
the buzzing bass is what gives me a chubby, it must remain!
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