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I think you could do a little bit better if you added the sound effects and background talking throughout like you did later and really emphasize certain detailed parts would really bring this together.
But still funny.
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I think you could do a little bit better if you added the sound effects and background talking throughout like you did later and really emphasize certain detailed parts would really bring this together.
But still funny.
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Needs more smashing around and maybe a little more vulgarity in it and I think you would have a solid audio.
I was going to add more sound effects, but the problem was that I was (and still am) using a site that only allows me 5 free sound effects a month, and I don't have very much money right now so I cant really pay a full membership, but thank you for the review!
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Yet again, Love your comedy, very fluid improv.
Once again, your word is flattering. I don't particularly care for the other words, just that one word.
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Good comedy and filler talking. lol.
Thank you for your kind word. Just one word.
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Its good, you just need two different contrasting voices for this part, the characters are kinda bleeding together because they sound a little the same.
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Crisp, no stagger and just simple good.
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I like the variation you have and the crackly voice you already have really plays into the other voices well. The only thing I would suggest is have different character development to which each one has its own personality. Although it was a simple phrase, there are numerous ways each one of those characters could have said them, giving the statement a more profound effect. Good stuff.
Great Idea. I will work on recording that and getting it uploaded! Thank you!
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This is awesome lol. Loved the difference in characters with the radio and demons. Sound effects were a nice touch too.
It was fun to do, but I've already got some nice ideas for when I redo this for an animation. Thanks for the review!
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This reminds me of a playstation pool game in a sleazy back alley bar with people who left there hopes behind in the 80s. The bar tender has been working there for 30yrs hoping for it to be a good job and place to meet women but found it was really just a black hole that took his youth and confidence. He just sits there, watching oddly dressed pool sharks coax another player to scrutiny. He sits there...... and he cries.
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