SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Anguish of the Morrow]

Ergh

Your music choice was good and your writing ability is very palatable. But I don't know about the acting to this, sounds like your reading it, no real emotion, since this is suppose to be very heart felt and dramatic. The character isn't holding any weight in his words. I think it would be better if you got the fluidity of the sentences and only emphasize emotion in certain words, its very choppy because of the random pausing in each phrase.

Don't mean to be crude, but I think if you work on it, it could turn out to be a lot better.

sparky275 responds:

Don't worry, wasn't crude at all! This is exactly the type of response I was hoping for. Thanks for your time. =]

[Many Impressions]

Ergh

Your Kung Pow impressions are untouchable except for chosen, voice needs to sound a bit deeper and more announcer-y. The Larry stuff sounds good, but your south park is a no go. Needs a lot more work. All of your Venture Bros. stuff is good as well.

I think this would be better if it was a little shorter or broken up into different pieces, still really good stuff man, keep it up.

SliceOfDog responds:

Thanks, and yeah, it was my first time doing the South Park ones, and I've been told my Chosen needs work before, so I'll have to work on it.

As for breaking it up, that's a fair point. I'll remember to do that in future, thanks.

[Why 80's villains always lose?]

Yeah

Lol. Your stuff is always so damn good!

[Ambient Expressions]

Yeah

The only thing I would tell ya is to have more of your quick parts in it and lose the piano, it really dropped the song into pieces and killed the songs mood. Other then those issues, it was pretty good.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, I really wasn't sure about the piano either so I'll get rid of that. Thanx for the advice!

[Radio Demo (Herald Camping)]

Ergh

You have a very good deep voice and timing for the music introductions, but the only thing I see wrong is there really isn't a lot of contrast between the radio show host and Herald. I think also when Herald was constantly drawing on, the radio host should be saying something in the background, either slightly repeating him or demeaning him. Pretty good voice either way.

[Enrichment Center Reminders]

Ergh

She is a little more high pitched. When you edit it, take out your breathing and background noises. Your 's's are a bit over emphasized too.

[Voice Demo of the Gods]

Ergh

Mickey, your first scream, and ren were pretty good. You show a lot of variety, but you packed in way too much in one showing. Also, put your voices in a scene to show you can convey your acting ability while doing the voices, so that way your displaying your ability a little bit better.

Also a good place for you to advertise your voice is on the forums, your more likely to get a response from there then here. Unfortunately, a lot of people mostly vote on creativity then actual acting ability.

Keep it up.

Octa8t8 responds:

Thanks. I shall take thy advice

[Snake voice acting audition]

Ergh

Your voice needs to be deeper, not more croak. Your voice is almost there its just the pitch, and you need to not make your pronunciation so noticeable. Your 's's are too noticeable. You have the ability to do the voice, just need to work on it. Check out my audio of Snakes Roommate and see if this helps you out with yours.

[Eggs, Sunny Side Up]

Yeah

I've always said this is your stronger music side, sounds kinda like a sub menu for a golfing game though. Still liked it. Has a good beat and over all feel to it.

Stavier responds:

It's something about jazz that I can somehow easily make it. Yeah, I could totally see the golfing thing & this is like a song for mainly any happy activity or outside work which is why I like this song. Thanx for the review!