SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Judgement: Part 1]

Well shit....

This is too damn good. Your gonna win the contest. I haven't got a chance now. Good job buddy :D Your story/writing, sound effects and background music/display, voice range.......... its all too damn good.

SeiyruRenaih responds:

I actually got a big kick out of your submission.

How did you know poop jokes make me laugh hysterically? Hearing what would seem like Solid Snake and Dr. Zoidberg talk about deadly poop farts is a +1 in my book.

[Worst Apocalypse Ever]

Ergh

I was laughin the whole time, but I think ya should of stopped right at. "we are out of poptarts!" I am scared of losing this thing now, though.

TomStheVoice responds:

Yeah, you got a good point. I wanted to emphasize the post-dramatic emotions of the first guy. Glad you enjoyed it. :) And good luck to ya! We're up against some crazy good compo (yourself included) :P

[Death Voice Acting]

Yeah

Simply great stuff :D

[Where's the Butter?]

Yeah

Dr. Marco Macho was the best character, I was laughin the whole time he came in.

[Walking 2wards Some Memories]

Ergh

Okay, I like the chorus and all that jazz, but the filter you are using or the bounce back from the vocals is discouraging due to it sounding like you are in a room. I think a good contrast would to keep the chorus voice the same, but make the actual words of the song crisp like the song is. If you listen, the music is very crisp and continuing the vocals in that distortion kinda conflicts with the music. Ya gotta let it flow with the music which gives it a better flow. If it is just a regular recording and that is how it came out, try to put up something in your recording room to dampen the bounce back of your voice. If not, just take out the filter on the lyrics, but keep it on for your chorus.

Thats just my take on it :D

BahBahBurten responds:

Thanks. Honest opinions with presentable solutions are the best kind.

[Walkin' Towards Some Love]

Ergh

I like it, but the finger snaps and claps kind of threw me off from the beat. I didn't feel it accented your floor bass that well. Maybe try to explore more of the snare system to add something else that makes it flow a little better. The tune at 0:46, 1:09 and 1:55 I think should have a bigger role in this piece to if your going for emotion. Great stuff though! Not really my cup-o-tea but that doesn't mean its not good.

Stavier responds:

Haa, thanx. The claps were actually snare/clap, but whenever I tried adding a snare it sounded too heavy/hip hop-ish, but I think I know what you mean by the snaps cuz I did pan that and the shaker. Yeah, this was meant to be kinda short cuz I notcied most of my songs are over 3 min. and shizz so yeah. Thanx for the review!!!

[Dreams (Stavier Remix)]

Yeah

Great stuff man! You had really good bass placement but didn't over do it. It was really easy to listen to and slip into it.

Stavier responds:

Thanx man!!! I'll probably end up editing this one a lil bit in the future or somethin', depends.

[War Stories]

Yeah

Love it :D

[Finklebottom Bigtits!]

Yeah

That damn movie voice is too good!

[Euphoric Orbit]

Ergh

Sounds great! Your breakat 02:45/02:59 was just a bit too long, shorten it slightly and I think you got a really good one here. Very smooth feeling as well as easy. The ending did not feel as great as the entire song did though, wish it had a feeling of completion, felt a little rushed.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, the reason it seems like it's long is cuz the bass starts it off & it's kinda hard to hear without headphones. Yeah, I tried to go for something simple, inspired by great techno, old skool classics on this site. As for the ending, well, I know what you mean. Thanx for the review!!!