SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just Go With It]

Yeah

Get a better snare noise for 00:38. That aside, this is what you should do. Your very good with mood and groove. The song has personality which I kinda feeling a lot of your techno is lacking just because I don't think your really putting yourself into em.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, some of my techno songs are really old songs, but I'm workin' harder on my techno ones. This one was just mellow & I wanna make a combination of mellow & techno, you know, e. piano etc. The ones that i think i have more feelin' for are my upbeat techno songs like Perpetual Island. I put feelin' in my songs of course, it just I'm more of an upbeat techno guy then downbeat or anythin' like that.

[Dance Tech Amplified]

Ergh

The sound at 00:16 sounds a bit harsh at first but is alright after the rest of the beat is in. Wasn't really feeling 2:08, the melody was kinda off putting and at 2:40 you have a lot going on. 3:14 felt like it was a totally different song, just took a different direction.

Just stuff I noticed while listening. Not really bad or good observations.

Stavier responds:

Yea, I know what you're takin' about. I understand that there was mood changes, just swappin', but I'm workin' on other songs that I know I wan't change the mood. Thanx for the review.

[Walkin' Towards Some Memories]

Ergh

Guitar had a good mood to it and feeling, but your drums are a little choppy. Other then that its good.

Stavier responds:

Thanx man, the guitar is my favorite part about this song.

[Dynamic Spate]

Ergh

Doesn't seem like your trying, to much repetition is a bad thing, cut it up to its core samples and I think you would have a better song.

[I Wish It Would Last]

Ergh

The buzzing is kinda off putting, doesn't feel good on the ears. 1:23 is when the song seems to be when it gets personality. Maybe instead of having the buzzing, get rid of that section and let it lead in.

McPhearson responds:

the buzzing bass is what gives me a chubby, it must remain!

[Press A to Ascend]

You...

Hope you like this song, Because it will be the end of you!!!!

McPhearson responds:

Hey, get back here you summabitch!

[Epsilon]

Ergh...

Its simple and good, just not my style. Stay in school.

McPhearson responds:

I'll get you, if it's the last thing I do! This isn't over!

[Even the Score]

Moo...

Just add a little bit of diversity with another verse, something different from what you are using, but put it in the middle and come back to the original. the Beginning is really good and strong like I was gingerly ear raped, but then it sticks with the same ol' same ol'. And your ending was kinda weak.

I like your stuff, just want a little more to the song and a good ending.

Schaafbros responds:

Thanks for the comment. It is pretty repetitive, I agree. I just tried to make it as if there was singing on top of it, hence all of the repeating parts.