SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The start of an Adventure]

Ergh

You gotta get a different brass sound, its way too synthetic sounding. I don't see it as an epic thing, sorta a what everyone else is doing now the hero is did, lol

Flaraen responds:

I know, I think so too.. I may get garage band

[Aishiteru (instrumental)]

Yeah

Well executed, I can tell your really putting yourself behind the piano. The strings kinda killed the music though because it drowns out the piano. I think a good soft beat would be better and just let the piano do the singing just because the strings make it sound synthetic.

[The Forgotten Passage]

Ergh

0:28 to 0:35 could use a better lead in, kinda felt separate. The ending got a little crowded too, but good tune and beat.

ragingmullet responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Its funny you mention those 2 spots because I had a hard time filling in those spots with stuff I liked. I tried but I've got lots of things to still learn.

[Fly Sky High - Balderdact]

Ergh

I think the only thing you can approve is dragging your melody out just a bit only because certain parts sound a bit choppy but it sounds good other wise, very epic adventure scene feel to it.

balderdact responds:

Yup, at the time I was making this I had a very limited amount of instruments available to use. Thanks for the review and I'll try to make a remix or something of this in the future. :D

[Groove It!]

Ergh

Ahh.... I don't think the vocals accent the song well only because I think you over used em a bit. If you only use them a little I think it will put a better flavor on the song. Had kind of a videogame feel to it too.

[Squid [MA]]

Blargh

I have no idea what you are trying to do with this, sounds like Mr. Wizard on acid. Your song really doesn't have a direction at all and the beat you have is completely different then your synthetic so it is off putting and the wa wa stuff really hurts the ears and you use it so much it kinda kills the song.

madnessassault responds:

>.>

[I-Saved-The-World: Vision]

Ergh

I think around 0:15 you should be adding the snare from 0:30 with the tap you introduced and allow 0:45 to come in at 0:30 because I think its only at 0:45 this song really starts to come together but you just kinda abandoned it and let go of your base song at 1:00. Needs more work, but you have the ability to make it better.

[[J.F] Brave the Storm (wip)]

Argh

I think this needs something to soften the buzzing noise a bit, its really off putting to the listener. Its an alright song, but when it goes quiet, it is almost a relief only because of how intense the buzzing toon is.

[Music is Life]

Ergh

Don't really feel this song, vocals kinda killed it because it sounded really grainy, and it kept going, nothing against you but I don't think the song needed vocals. If you do just exerts would be better. As I listened to it some of the music seemed a little grainy too, don't know if it was just the program or what.

[A Journey to Elsewhere]

Ergh

I really liked the fact you changed pace a lot throughout and all the sounds really complimented each other.... but there is something about this song I don't like, either the sound itself or over all toon. But just because of my own personal feeling about it doesn't mean you didn't do a good job. Keep it up.

DJThunderGod responds:

I hear what you mean but thanks for the review!