SirKillington's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blue Air, Purple Sky]

Ergh

The song starts off pretty good but at 0:27 the off tune really threw me off. It started to sound better with the guitar sound, and I liked the lull at 2:06 and the sound was getting pretty good......... I don't know if it is just me but that reintroduction of that off tune 2:34 just is messin with me. Like it shouldn't be there. I don't know.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, this song turned out strange. I realize that the part at 0:27 was kinda suckish cuz the bass guitar comes outta nowhere. Really glad you like the part at 2:06 cuz that's like an awesome break. I get what you're sayin' at 2:34, maybe it ruined the moment, not sure. Anyways, thanx for the review

[Midnight Bangin']

Ergh

0:55 to 1:08 was a really good lead in, blended really well. I like the pick up at 2:04. All in all I like the way this stayed different throughout it, the same repetition gets old after a while, and the different breaks in the beat really help the listener to go through the song. Nice simple tune.

Stavier responds:

Yeah, it does get a little repetitive after awhile. Thanx, somethin' simple is what I was also aimin' for :D

[Pause, Rewind, Stop, Play!]

Yeah

I'm not a hip hop guy, but this has got a good beat and melody to it, easy to tap my foot to, I wouldn't add any vocals, think it will take away from the way this sounds. Its like an epic song slotted for someone "rollin' deep," as they say. Good stuff.

Stavier responds:

Thanx for the review. Yeah, I might not add vocals cuz I'm to obsessed with the chorus. Really glad you liked the beat & it wasn't just my friend that said he liked the beat & me. I'm really glad you checked the song now & not when it had the annoyin' synth I replaced or you would've gave this a 9, lolz. Haaa, nice sayin' there & thanx again for reviewin'. Glad you liked this one the most cuz this is one of my personal fav'z!!!!!

[Odell's VA Demo]

Yeah

good stuff.

OdellAtkinson responds:

Thank you, sir.

[D-Mac 2010 Commercial Voice]

Yeah

Holy crap, first I was looking at everyone's artwork that made me realize I need to step up my game and decided to color and draw better. Now I listen to this and it makes me feel like puking. This is good............. this is damn good. I'm going to strive as hard as I can to be up to your level........... Its such a tall mountain.

[Dot Dot Dot]

Yeah

Very well done, more so on how the pronunciation of your words and really how you presented what you were seeing when you read the review. I bet you were laughing the whole time. The idea for reading someones blam review was ingenious as well, kudose to you sir.

[Art-Link, V.A. "Relax"]

Ergh

Yet again man, try to read out each sentence before, multiple times to see what you are trying to show the audience. You have a good accent for it, but the acting needs more work.

Art-Link responds:

Yet again, thanks for the advice, those voice actings were from a kinda long time ago and I was vey unexperienced, I shall try again soon.

[Art-link, Voice Acting num1]

Ergh

You need to talk to yourself more and realize the inflections of emotions your trying to convey....... you need to know how to make your emotions sound real and authentic. Felt like you were trying to be surprised instead of being surprised. Act it out before you do it.

Art-Link responds:

I´ll do that, thanks alot

[Emotionally unstable]

Yeah

Don't k now why but I really like the offset tune to this, really plays into the whole feel of the song. At 02:20 felt like the whole mood changed, so that was a little off putting but other than that it was pretty good.

[Just another love theme]

Ergh

Read this while listening:

[insert name], how could you have left me...... me. Everything I did for you, carried you along the way. I loved you when you were in that chair, before your new legs and you do this to me. Your too good for me now, is that it! Just another stepping stone to newer legs. So what if I told you I've had better lays than you, its true. A truth I never hesitated to tell you. Not once did I tell you, you couldn't or said anything about your disfigurement.

Jesus, what have I become because of you... you monster. You ate up everything in my soul, and my house. Nothing was good enough, not the bathtub washes or the awkward haircuts(crying). Do.....(sob) do you remember when I rolled you to the edge of the pier. I told you if you fell and sank I would be there to get you out, be there to carry you, be there to love you. And now my love is gone with you and your perfection. As old news as your previous life.

But its okay, I'm going to be better from this. I will rise above you and make you see you are nothing and I am the strong one. Never looking back at the past times of joy we shared. Wheeling you to the dentist against your will, putting the wheel lock on. You could never reach it...... but that's the past now. The only future I see for you is my mission. I will bring you back to your disfigured self. You will be re-crippled and your fancy legs will no longer serve you as a new life. You will never know it was me. We will eventually get back together and I will wheel you to the pier once more....

Can you feel yourself sinking. Can you feel the panick. No one there to carry you. No one there to save you. No one there to love you.... That was me.... DIE YOU BASTARD.......... die and never come back to the old life you left. You CRIPLE!!!

LOL! Thats what I was thinking when I heard this. Good Job.

Vertlain responds:

You've got some wild imagination... ô_o Now I'll have to think about making a music video for this. Thank you for all the (kind) words!